As I said in my profile I have found the delights of poetry:D. I have finished one about someone's lost love
. It doesnt have a name but it can be called um Tormented Soul
. So here goes my first blog. Hope you like it, let me know any thoughts
:
Tormented Soul
Heart aches like a broken dream,
Eyes glisten with crystal tears,
No breathe strong enough,
All for a shattered love.
Pain mingles around the undivided body,
Hands shake uncontrollably,
Mouth quivers,
For you know it's all over.
Questions run hysterically round your mind,
And the answers do not follow,
Instead tears flow,
And the sting of true love takes no prisoners.
If only it could end,
All of it,
If only the pain could be taken away,
Forever, leaving a destroyed soul.
But love does not abscond,
It is eternal,
Never to be forgotten,
The essence of being never forgets true love.
http://www.tsoanelo.blog.co.uk
2008-06-02 @ 13:35